I figured that since there was an "Episode Reviews" thread for the episodes of the main series, I would create a review for the sub series "The Draconian Wars". That way, I can hear all the feedback from people. Please, if you enjoyed it, or have any suggestions for improvements, tell me. Just make sure to put the episode number on the subject line.

I'm aware that this may sound self-centered and unnecessary, since I am the only one contributing to that section of the website at this time, but when other people do post their work there, it'll be a lot less messy to keep the reviews on the "The Draconian Wars".

Just read the second episode.

Good story, loved the ship fight action sequences. Curtis and Cynthia are becoming more interesting characters and I can easily see why you'd want profiles put up for them on the site. I must say having an episode use the Utto or Satel was a thought I'd have never thought of. I just thought of them for that one time use in Time and Again. But then again in season three I'll be connecting some stories together I doubt any one would suspect would ever have certain elements from them come up again. As for the flip side to this review, calling fighter ships or Z-87s "fighter planes," I bet is confusing to readers unfamiliar with the 26th Century stories in general. It makes it sound like air craft are being used in space. Little things did pop up again how ever but not as frequent as in episode one. The only time this confused me was in a part just before act four. Over all the story did capture the spirit right for what makes for a great Buck Rogers story ever if it was Wilma and Fox focused. Which is still good. Those two don't get attention very often so it was nice seeing them how they were in the spot light.

Good job, OB .


Erin

Thank you. This was a nice episode to write, and I kind of consider this the second part of the introduction story, mostly because it deals with the premise of the series: a war between Earth and Draconia. I tried to make most of the scenes in the middle of the story action-orientated, because I realized that I would have to do a lot of talking scenes, and that would have been very boring.

I put Wilma and Fox in the spotlight for a reason, and I'm glad that you liked it. Unlike the main series, I plan on using Fox as a character in most episodes. I'm assuming that most people who read this will already be familiar with the main series, so I didn't really feel that I had to really make Buck known to most extent. The first episode, Buck was used throughout because I wanted to set the scene between Curtis and Buck. Believe it or not, Cynthia was originally designed as a random, faceless type of soldier would do "soldierly" things when needed, but stay in the background when she wasn't. However, I could see some potential to use her as Curtis's assistant.

Third (only more point after this, so bear with me), I used the Utto and Satel because I wanted to tie this episode in to a statement that was made about weapons of mass destruction still being on the planet. I figured Curtis could receive some of those weapons on the black market. One goal of this series is to remain as consistent as possible to the main series. If I could, I would actually number which episode each story would come right after, because the goal would be to fit them intricately. This story, for example, would come right after "Metamorphosis" (it was actually supposed to come after "Time and Again", but I dragged my feet for so long that I finished "Metamorphosis", and I figured the war theme would tie in better there).

Finally, I read your suggestions. I will make sure to call them "fighter jets", which does sound better than planes. Also, I'll look into Act 4, and see if something doesn't flow right. Areas that need improvement are just as important to mention in reviews as the good points.

...I can't believe I messed up the title to some thing I wrote. And to explain, I went to be ultra early last night so when I was typing that first post I meant 'Again in Time'. On the plus side I didn't know last night was the change. Thank goodness the cell phone automatically updated it's self and I still had an alarm go off when it should .


Erin